Tag: flash fiction

On the 1 Train

The empty platform, temperate, smells like wet stone and musk, smoke and metal. The young man steadies himself against the tile wall as his friends laugh and chatter, waiting for the train at the earliest brink of morning.

The woman, old and fat, she drips with jewelery and is draped with patterns, an heiress from Dominica, Lola, she had thrown the young man a party earlier at her small West Village flat. He’d written her a song, a simple bossa, gave her the original score and he never imagined it would make her so happy. He’d never been the guest of honor before, other than birthdays, which you really don’t have to do anything to be celebrated. She’d made gazpacho and bought him a bottle of his favorite Scotch. They sat and laughed, he sneered with his roommate because the bassist wasn’t aware she’d flashed her crotch when she sat Indian style on the floor.

At last the train comes, and the scotch bottle is half empty. He hides the bottle under a wool poncho he borrowed from Lola, his arms tucked around it. The train is empty, and the rattle of the metal wheels, the clack like snares in a parade band, is loud. The train tosses. He sits back on the hard yellow seat, reading the advertisements and the messages and monograms etched in the steel walls. He sips, while another rider, also on his dark morning ride home, watches him sip. Tomorrow he will roll out of bed in the afternoon, drink water and smoke a cigarette. He’ll head to school, and on a polished saxophone he’ll play jazz with his friends. He’ll eat Jamaican patties on 125th street, and finish the Scotch over a game of dominoes at night.

While the 1 Train travels back and forth.

The hot platform, full and humid, smells like an old tub, like rust and roasted nuts, like a mud puddle. The man adjusts his computer bag, sweats in his khakis and checks his mobile phone for messages from the office.

He finds an empty yellow seat and he sits, adjusts his computer bag and crosses his legs. He can still taste the morning coffee he brewed in a French Press, at his home on Long Island, where he’d awoken to give his infant daughter a bottle. He had smiled at her when she grabbed his fingers and cooed while she drank. He checks his phone for messages from work as the train clacks and sways, a muted rhythm. He reads the advertisements and the marks roughed into the metal walls where he stares at his reflection. He’s gotten fat, and his hair is thin.

Later, he will head to a luncheon to listen to speakers talk about technology and business. They’ll read results from the study and show charts decorated in colors and dotted lines while he takes notes. They’ll serve wine, which he loves, but he will only have one glass. When it is done he will ride the subway back to Penn station, where he will catch a train to Long Island. In the blue cushioned seat, watching Queens roll by like a reel of film, he’ll open his computer to work on articles and send messages. He’ll think about his daughter and his wife, about the lawn he has to cut this weekend. He’ll fret when his laptop battery loses power. At night he’ll read Whitman and Goodnight Moon to his daughter, he’ll cook dinner for his family and fall asleep before the late shows run on television.

While the 1 Train travels back and forth.

The phone rings: Answering the prompt

Flickr photo by faungg

Flickr photo by faungg

Today’s writing prompt could win me eternal glory (or a few pencils).

According to the inaugural post of Promptly, a new Writer’s Digest blog penned by Zachary Petit, the person who submits the best story answering his first writing prompt will win “some around-the-office writing swag.”

I’ll take swag for sure.

The prompt:

In 500 words or less, funny, sad or stirring:

The phone rings and a low voice groans—“Why me?”
You hang up.
Twenty minutes later, it rings again. “You made a mistake.”
The dial tone throbs as the phone hangs from its cord, limp.

Here’s my entry. Wish me luck:

The phone rings

The phone rings and a low voice groans—“Why me?”

You hang up.

Twenty minutes later, it rings again. “You made a mistake.”

The dial tone throbs as the phone hangs from its cord, limp.

You make yourself a pot of coffee, set the kettle over the burner and toss five spoonfuls of Kona in the French press. Ten minutes later the kettle screams and you ignore it.

The kettle spits.

You change your socks because the cold stone floor chilling just the ball of your foot feels strange to you. It’s like the whole of your foot is dead except for one patch.

“If you’d like to make a call please hang up and dial the number again.”

You smell the Kona grounds from the bathroom, and hear the kettle whistle and gurgle as you brush your teeth.

A puddle of hot water bubbles under the flame.

Seven minutes later you fill your cracked Elvis mug with coffee and drink it black while a woodpecker hammers into your cottage somewhere outside.

You turn on the television and bring up the guide, and the bird keeps drilling in two-second intervals.

Paid programming — paid programming — paid programming.

And you shake your head — “Why me?”

An hour later you hang up the phone.

It rings again.

The love nature couldn’t allow

3390406306_152ff569a1_oA half-mile down the road a squirrel and a crow lie dead in the middle of the street, both a bit flatter since more than a few cars have run them over. But when I saw the duo in the street yesterday as I drove home from work, I couldn’t help but imagine a story for those two creatures. Why were these animals together?

Squirrel hadn’t told his family or friends where he spent his afternoons, how he jumped from branch to branch finally end up on a power line three miles from his den. They didn’t ask, they were more concerned about the latest gossip sweeping the trees.

For Crow, escape was more difficult, as her family and friends could fly three miles rather easily. Crow just had to take her chances with the eyes in the the sky.

At last, Crow and Squirrel would arrive on their own power line, while both of their families back home prattled on about the latest gossip sweeping the trees and skies.

Crow, like a solo ballerina, danced on the wire, closer to the squirrel. While squirrel bent his head and crawled near. They were at last together. Squirrel buried his nose in her feathers and her black eyes glistened and blinked. She nuzzled his fur with her beak. Today she couldn’t help wrapping her wing around squirrel, tickling his taut legs. And maybe it was the joy of it all that caused Squirrel’s tail to swing towards the sky, brushing the power line above them just enough to complete the circuit.

Her wings were still wrapped around him when they fell, while back at their homes, each family chattered about the latest gossip sweeping the trees. Somewhere a squirrel had fallen in love with a crow.